How to Read Like a Writer:
1) Pick a scene. Any scene. If you’re writing an action-packed story, you might pick an action scene. Or maybe you just pick a scene that stuck out to you.
While you are reading the scene, highlight words and phrases that stick out to you. We’ll come back to this later.
Now answer the following question:
- What happens in this scene? Why does this happen?
For example, in Harry Potter and the Sorcerer’s Stone, there is a scene in which Harry, Ron, and Hermione get caught in some vine things as a security measure. Hermione is the first to fall through. Why? Because she knew what to do and remained calm so that the vines would not grab her like they did her friends.
2) Reread the scene and answer the following question:
- Why does the author make this happen?
What purpose did this scene have? Did it show character traits? Did it expand world building? Did it further the plot? Did it increase the action? Decrease the action? Start the action? Was it used as a threshold from one (metaphorical) world to the next?
3) Reread the scene and make a list of any new information that is given to the reader and everything that happens.
- Why was it presented in this order?
If you switch around the order of a few things, does the scene cease to make sense? Is an info-dump created? Does the presentation affect pacing and mood? Note the relationship between the release of new information and the events of the scene. What happens when?
4) Go back to your highlighted words and phrases.
- Why did you highlight these words and phrases?
What thoughts and feelings did they evoke? Were you reminded of anything? Was the language vivid? Can you spot any literary devices? Is there a rhythm to it (read it aloud)? Have you learned new ways to say things?
Once you’ve answered that, replace those words and rewrite those phrases with synonyms. How does the scene change?
Now change them again, but with the intention of making the scene grittier, or faster, or lighter in tone, or alliterative. How does it change the scene?
Switch around the original words and phrases. How does a change in juxtaposition and diction change the scene? Why is it better that a certain phrase is phrased a certain way?
5) Take general notes on all your favorite books
- What is the POV? What is the tense? Does the POV change? Are most of your favorite books in this POV and/or tense?
- On average, how long are sentences or paragraphs?
- Are there a lot of main characters? Very few main characters? Lots of minor characters and only a few main characters?
- What characters do you connect with most? What do they have in common (e.g., they tend to think about the world in a similar way)?